Describing
People
Look
at these two paragraphs about the fisherman:
1. This is a picture of a fisherman from Chile. He has been
fishing, and he is carrying a fishing net full of the day’s catch. His hair is
grey. He is wearing black shorts and a T-shirt. He has a grey beard and
moustache. He looks strong. There are many wrinkles around his eyes. Maybe his
T-shirt is made out of fishing net. He is old.
2. This is a picture of a fisherman from Chile. This man is very
old. His hair is grey, and he has a grey beard and moustache. There are many
wrinkles around his eyes, but he looks strong. He has been fishing, and he is
carrying a fishing net full of the day’s catch. He is wearing black shorts and
a T-shirt. Maybe his T-shirt is made out of fishing net.
Which paragraph is easier to
understand? Why is it easy to understand?
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